debussygirl wrote:SM did it perfectly. Period. There is no point into going into details like that. To me, that's just an area not to be watched or read because it's just...not something to be taken lightly like that, just to be read at a whim. I'm not very good at expressing my feelings a lot of the time because there don't seem to be any adequete words that are either powerful enough or not cheesy. But it's just that stuff shouldn't be out for people to see and read it's just wrong to me, that something that's supposed to be so (this is where lack of wordage comes in)...sacred in a way...be put out there for everyone to gawk at. It's not cool. And just because other people write that doesn't mean SM should. She handled that part beautifully I thought. We knew they had their night, and that was good enough for me.
Let's just get that out there and talk about the THE BIG PURPLE ELEPHANT in the room. WE ALL HAVE BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS NIGHT AND IF YOU SAY THAT YOU WEREN'T THEN YOU ARE LYING!
All I wanted was exactly what I had been given for the last 3 books. Just beause they were now unclothed, doesn't mean we can't still have touching and kissing in the "safe places". We can still talk about the fire in the pit of the stomach or the electricity zinging across the skin. There was nothing....and I was bummed.
I was so bummed, in fact, that I wrote my own...trying to keep SM's style in tact...and keeping it PG-13. It is attached to my sig if you're interested in reading it. I didn't post this so I could promote my fanfic--I wrote it months ago--I just wanted to give my opinion like everyone else has.
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