Jazz Girl wrote:There is one that I think is a universal concensus:
"For the first time in almost a century, I felt hope" Would have worked great just after Alice and Jasper's kiss.
"You are one frightening little monster." Pefect either before or after their training fight.
ringswraith wrote:The "I can't fight an eclipse" line being missing was the biggest offender for me.
misspikaboo wrote:I really wanted Edward's "Don't watch" line just before Bree is destroyed. The scene felt so much colder without it.
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