Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread 2

Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby GenevieveCullen » Mon Jun 29, 2009 6:59 pm

Chapter 27 of Tropic of Virgo is up. Here's Buttonfly Rob to celebrate ;)
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby ringswraith » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:24 pm

GenevieveCullen wrote:Chapter 27 of Tropic of Virgo is up.


SPOILERS!

Ugh! Just when you think "it can't possibly get any worse," we get this and get proven wrong.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby GenevieveCullen » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:37 pm

ringswraith wrote:SPOILERS!

Ugh! Just when you think "it can't possibly get any worse," we get this and get proven wrong.

SPOILER
I know what you mean. Was expecting it to happen though. Doesn't make it any less gut-wrenching. Stupid Edward and his slow brain.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby navarre » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:44 pm

ringswraith wrote:
GenevieveCullen wrote:Chapter 27 of Tropic of Virgo is up.


SPOILERS!

Ugh! Just when you think "it can't possibly get any worse," we get this and get proven wrong.



******SPOILER******

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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby SweetKay » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:45 pm

GenevieveCullen wrote:Chapter 27 of Tropic of Virgo is up. Here's Buttonfly Rob to celebrate ;)



OH SQUEAL!! Thanks!!

Be back later!!

OMG!!! I can not believe that he is being so, so stupid!! Poor Bella!
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby GenevieveCullen » Mon Jun 29, 2009 9:49 pm

SPOILERS FOR CH. 10 THE DOMINATE/SUBMISSIVE

So I've decided to reread the two fics chapter to chapter. My heart broke with every lash during the chastisement. I really don't know how I'm going to handle Chapter 30 from Edward's POV.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby Amanda Beth » Mon Jun 29, 2009 10:53 pm

The next chapter of LAF is finished as promised. It's long. Normally they're around 2500-3000 words, this one is 5500.

missp: I love your writing style! It's hard to read another version of Renesmee (btw you put Renessmee but there is only one s) because everyone sees her so differently. I would suggest making more paragraphs when writing. Every time the person speaking changes that should be a new line. I had a read a few lines over again because I hadn't realized someone else was now talking. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby akire » Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:20 pm

GenevieveCullen wrote:
ringswraith wrote:SPOILERS!

Ugh! Just when you think "it can't possibly get any worse," we get this and get proven wrong.

SPOILER
I know what you mean. Was expecting it to happen though. Doesn't make it any less gut-wrenching. Stupid Edward and his slow brain.


SPOILER

Exactly, Jen!! And I can't decide if I want to cry or smack them both. OMG JUST TALK TO EACH OTHER! But oh, the angst.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby SweetKay » Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:37 am

Amanda Beth wrote:The next chapter of LAF is finished as promised. It's long. Normally they're around 2500-3000 words, this one is 5500.

missp: I love your writing style! It's hard to read another version of Renesmee (btw you put Renessmee but there is only one s) because everyone sees her so differently. I would suggest making more paragraphs when writing. Every time the person speaking changes that should be a new line. I had a read a few lines over again because I hadn't realized someone else was now talking. Keep up the good work!



Amanda Beth: Excellent chapter and you were right, tissues were needed! Keep writing and updating. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

missp: I very much enjoyed your first chapter. I too found it confusing when the person or thoughts changed. I have seen other authors just do something as simple as putting in a line, ________________ within a chapter when that occurs. I think that would help. Keep writing and keep updating.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction discussion thread

Postby Jazz Girl » Tue Jun 30, 2009 1:44 am

AmandaBeth~ I find it hard to comment chapter by chapter sometimes as I get into the flow of reading and don't want to interupt to include my innane ramblings. I will do my best to go back in and at least comment in a few strategic places. But, it will be nothing but gushing. But, let me just say the following. Oh. My. Gods. That was in all ways bloody amazing. You have a beautiful grasp on the characters, even Ness. Your story and storyline is flowing just perfectly. Brilliant. Just bloody brilliant. Can't wait to read more.

But, to those who haven't yet read Chpt 18-Borrowed Time, she is not playing about the tissues. And, not just a few either.
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