Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby Jazz Girl » Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:35 pm

ringswraith wrote:WARNING: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor discussion!

I'm with y'all on the severity of Bella's crash. But I think there's the possibility of a two-for-one here.

James obviously knows what happened to Bella. What if he visits her one day and brings up her past, provoking her into taking a bunch of her meds? And then have Edward walk in, finding Bella's door ajar, Bella (hopefully just unconscious) in her bed... Add some red and Tatward goes loco, too.

Also, regarding Edward's desire for another tat- what do y'all think he'll get? And where? I'm wondering if he'll copy Jasper with his tat of Alice... That, or something like "Property of Swan" somewhere. :lol:



Oh Sweet Baby Jesus save us all!! That was not anything I ever even considered. But, James strikes me as just the crazy mindfracking kind to do it. And that would be one breakdown that would be just downright frightening and dangerous to see. I do suspect James of bad bad things. For a while I had some hope, but the stalking has pretty much convinced me he's just a DB of epic proportions and there will be a reckoning between him and TattWard. I honestly am really just hoping Jazz and Em are there to keep him from killing James and going to jail.

Rings~ as for TattWard's new/next tatt, umm, well, I rather like the idea of "Property of Swan" somewhere, and I am specifically seeing it in an arch, in black scripty letters right over...Well, that's not his name, but I'll be happy to introduce you... :lol: :twisted: *raises eyebrows* I do so hope I am not being too subtle :twisted:

Ashley~ Ummmm, I just have to ask... you did read the oneshot about Edward's list, or at least one very specific item off of Edward's list, didn't you????? Cause, oh my gods, if you haven't you need to march your buns right over to FFn and pull up LAC's profile and get to reading!!!! Seriously, two words, HEART. FAILURE. You wanna talk PossessiveWard!!!! Holy Fracking Hell!!!!! I almost ALMOST felt a little twinge of bad for... uhh... that boy. Then I thought about it for another microsecond and seriously wanted to run over and hug Edward for such a... commanding performance!! :lol: After he was...ummm...done....of course. I have a feeling approaching too soon might have been dangerous to my health!
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby Dovrebanen » Wed Sep 09, 2009 4:01 pm

Clipped Wings and Inked Armor
This last chapter was heavy. Like the rest of you, I loved Edward talking to his "kitty", and how annoyed he was about Alice taking the matter into her own hands.

What I got out of this chapter is that the emotional damage that has been done to Bella goes way deeper than I thought. Just a single question, and it totally pushed her off the edge. I think it will take a lot of time before she is able to talk to Edward about it. The guilt is really killing her. It is like she is welcoming the pain of the tattoo, both because she thinks she deserves it and because it replaces the emotional pain for a while.
What I am anxious to see is how Edward is going to deal with it when Bella finally breaks. Because there is no doubt in my mind that she will. And he is dealing with so many issues of his own. I just hope that they will find the strength to walk into the future together, and face their pasts together. But it is going to be a very hard road.
Caryn - I agree with you about Edward. I think he might fall too. And I think we have yet to see the true extent of his emotional pain. And it might come crashing down on him when Bella reveals her past, and he has to try to stay strong.

Rings - That is a great point about James. I would assume that he does know what happened, and at some point he might use it against her. But what I don't understand is his motivation. Is it hate for Edward, or is it that he wants Bella for himself?
As for Tattwards new tattoo...I hope it is something related to Bella, and his love for her. And maybe a small kitten somewhere :lol:
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby navarre » Wed Sep 09, 2009 11:46 pm

ringswraith wrote:WARNING: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor discussion!

I'm with y'all on the severity of Bella's crash. But I think there's the possibility of a two-for-one here.

James obviously knows what happened to Bella. What if he visits her one day and brings up her past, provoking her into taking a bunch of her meds? And then have Edward walk in, finding Bella's door ajar, Bella (hopefully just unconscious) in her bed... Add some red and Tatward goes loco, too.

Also, regarding Edward's desire for another tat- what do y'all think he'll get? And where? I'm wondering if he'll copy Jasper with his tat of Alice... That, or something like "Property of Swan" somewhere. :lol:


Rings ~ Are you lurking over at Twilighted Forum? Because what you just stated regarding James, is exactly what a few over there have stated...maybe Caryn, too. I know she laid some serious mindfracking with her proposal of what might happen regarding James/Bella/Edward and talk about sending a few spinnning... :lol: Loved it, but I put my own twist to it right under her post.

Yeah, I think when this whole thing goes down, I believe it will be one violent confrontation. I also think that Aro & Caius are in that mix as well. I had mentioned after Lady M's post about James as a dirty cop, that possibly Aro & Caius may have a "you scratch my back & I scratch yours" with James. If so, this will get really fracking dirty.
And let's not forget PornoTanya and what poop she may throw in this mix.

Love this addicting story. Whoot!

Now if you will excuse me, I just got an alert that Masque of The Red Death just updated -YAY!
Let's go see what kind of torture EvilVampWard has in store for Bella. :twisted:
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby ringswraith » Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:16 am

No, I don't- and considering what Caryn said a few posts back, I don't think she posted that either. :D

I came across that thought this morning. It's a big "What if?" but it's plausible.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby ♥midnight_sun♥ » Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:35 am

First, can I just say that I cannot visit my mother anymore? Like...ever. Apparently my little brother (he is 4) named one of their cats Kitty. :shock: I have yet to say her name aloud nor have I been able to keep a straight face when someone else says her name. It makes it worse that its a girl and small, beautiful, big Disney-esque eyes, and dainty looking. It sounds too much like Bella when you have to describe that cat. I swear I will never forget this.

Caryn~No, I didn't know that LAC wrote a one shot for Edward's list! But I will have to wait until tomorrow while the parentals are out (I'm visiting my mum this week) to read it. So far I have been very careful in when I read fanfics, but I don't want to risk it while they are here.

Rings~That sounds like an excellent theory and very interesting. I hadn't thought about that before. I am thinking whatever the tat is Edward will get something that reminds him of Bella. I am also thinking it will be along the lines of "Property of Swan" or perhaps even something like "Tiger Kitten".

Also, I keep thinking of PornoTanya looking like the girl that apparently will be playing Tanya in the movies. I think that is definitely NOT a good thing for the films if the girl looks witchy and fanfic strip club material - which she does. :?

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OMG! That is about all I can say. I am sad that Edward wasn't there when she woke up (as I thought that he was who was humming her to sleep) - although he may have been the reason for her thinking someone was watching her, but then Carlisle and Jasper talked like he hadn't seen her yet so I don't know what to think yet. Sadly, Esme has apparently been killed off by Carlisle so no HEA there. I am still wondering what is happening with Rose and if Alice has enough of her power as a human to be able to know not to go to the cabin. I sincerely hope that the kiss was only because of the blood and not for any other reasons at all. Plus, I don't think that BV is the kind of person who would write something of that nature anyway so hopefully there is nothing to worry about there.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby oleander » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:03 am

I read The Best Man last night from start to finish and I can't even begin to find words to describe it...I bawled my eyes out for an hour. The only other fanfic that made me cry like that was chapter 24 of TEF, which left me in a puddle for hours.

CWIA is all-consuming and ring's theory is really digging at me. ;)
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby twilightsagaaddict » Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:27 am

Hi everyone!

I think I'm caught up enough with the ff's to actually post again! ;)

CW&IA
~ I am so on edge as to what James is going to do to Bella. Christy, I agree that I think he's in with Aro and Caius. The depth of her breakdown was just heartwrenching. Their declaration that they both need each other was an awesome way to end the chapter. ( Although I did laugh when he was talking to his "Kitty"...)
Hmm.....Caryn, I like your, um, suggested placement of Tattward's new tattoo......

THE LIST
~ I'm really sad this one's over. I really liked how LAC wrote this story; it could have been canon. When Bella gave Edward "The Gift", my chest just clenched at the love she was showing him. I'll have to go check out Edward's one-shot!!!

THE BEST MAN
~ This one really stuck with me. When I read SPOILER Jasper and Alice's accident SPOILER I felt like I got hit in the chest. The simplicity of the story made it a quick read, but one that was so worth it.

Is anyone reading begrudged by withthevampsofcourse and jandco? I stumbled upon it a few days ago. It was an auction piece, but they are continuing the story. Bella is living with the wolves when the Cullens return to Forks.......

Any other new ones out there you guys are reading?


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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby navarre » Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:58 am

ringswraith wrote:No, I don't- and considering what Caryn said a few posts back, I don't think she posted that either. :D

I came across that thought this morning. It's a big "What if?" but it's plausible.



Okay. :) I just thought that was pretty cool what you said because a few other over there were thinking the exact same thing. Great speculations everywhere!!

I agree, it is very plausible! James is that twisted and I think Sociopathic that he would go the route of messing with Bella so bad that she would OD. On the other hand, because he knows how Edward feels about Bella, he may try to "taint the goods" or harm in some other way to destroy Edward.

To quote Alice "The storm is coming".
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby Jazz Girl » Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:19 am

ringswraith wrote:No, I don't- and considering what Caryn said a few posts back, I don't think she posted that either. :D

I came across that thought this morning. It's a big "What if?" but it's plausible.


Rings~ Actually, I took your idea (giving you full credit of course) over to the forum on Twilighted to see what their reaction would be to such a devious bit of mindfrackery on James' part. It did garner quite the interesting response from HH herself...

HunterHunting wrote: Well, well, well you little minx, coming to the thread to shart up some (shiza). I like it. A lot. I do. that's an interesting theory and of course I can't comment on why I find it interesting and what may or may not happen with James and 'the reveal' (Bella being engaged to Jake) but what I can say is that I'm very interested to hear how you ladies and peens if you are out there, think Edward will find out about Bella's past.

So throw me some ideas, because I already know what's going to happen but I want to see how close you can get, since you all have some pretty decent insight into my thought processes at this point....


And, of course the twisted sisters on Twilighted were all a twitter about it, thinking I was everything from the antichrist to a genius for suggesting such a thing. :D I heart those girls and boys over there...hard. If nothing else, I kind of like the "no filters" rules. Makes free expression and quoting just a little easier. But, I love my Lexies first, of course.

TEF Update~ Ang posted a sneak peek of the next chapter on Twilighted and Facebook last night. She asked me to deliver it to you all as well. So, take a look...

AngelAtTwilight wrote: Outtake 8 : The Firsts - Sneak Peek #2

He hummed, intensifying the shivers and tingles, his hot breath on my neck. "'...You smell so good, Bella... I always think about this... I want to drown in you."

I bit my lip, my heart inside my throat, and closed my eyes, overwhelmed a little. "...This is a lot of emotion for us to be handling. We're really young..."

"If you look at it that way," he argued softly, trailing his nose down the side of my throat.

"H-How do you... look at it?" I practically sang my question, as tiny diamond snowflakes fell around us, lingering on the shelving of the porch and around the circle we were making as we swayed from side to side to the music. It was freezing cold outside, but the body heat intensified by our proximity created an amazingly warm bubble around us. I wasn't shivering from the cold... only the anticipation of us being this close.

Our parents were getting louder, shouting that we had four minutes until the new year arrived. They were clearly drunk, but it didn't phase Edward whatsoever. There was no momentum lost.

"I think we're more of old souls, Bella... I can't explain it and I don't want you to freak out on me. I know we've only known each other for five months, but I truthfully don't... see this..." He paused to pull me closer, our chests crushing together while he kept his face buried between my face and my shoulder, "...as a typical teenage relationship... You're different... and you make me feel different when I'm with you."

"You make me feel different too," I stated, shivering.

He smiled and pulled back, our hips pressed together, our backs arched away, our arms locked around each other. Each place our bodies touched, my skin was alive with that electric current that I never understood but had come to crave.

I stared into his eyes, amazed at the turn of events. It was as if the entire planet had shifted on its’ axis, making us melt closer together. In just a few moments alone, we went from one thing to something completely different. Something magical.


We are hoping to have the full Outtake up tomorrow, I think. Ang sends her love.
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Re: Twilight Fanfiction Discussion Thread

Postby ringswraith » Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:44 am

Caryn: Thanks for posting that bit from HunterHunting. :D You might have to link me to that forum, if only to prove that there are "peens" out there. :lol:

I haven't read TEF, but I like the outtake. One comment, though? It should be "...the planet had shifted on its axis" and not "its' axis." Its is already possessive. :)
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