tricia wrote:i feel so bad for her. She must feel so violated. Writing is so personal and to have something put out there when she isn't ready for that.
There was HUGE guilt on my half but i did read it. It is her best yet. I actually cried at my computer in a half dozen places.
Please Steph, please don't let this stop you. I understand so much more about Twilight now from reading this. It really is the best one yet. Some of the best parts are yet to come... i want to know what is in his mind when he finally kisses her, when she is touching his arm in the meadow, when she is begging for immortality. I want to know what he thinks of her mother. I want to hear what Esme says to Edward when she first meets Bella.
The first chapter has been out there for a while... it was a tease, it made you want more.. but the first 12 chapters!!!! it is sheer torture to not be able to read the rest.
I agree with you. I found it more enjoyable then Twilight. It started to answer some the questions that had been swimming in my head about certain characters. If she decides not to finish it, I really do understand. However, I hope over time Edward will convince her to finish his story.