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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby blasphemous_contessa » Thu Mar 19, 2009 9:46 pm

You guys are all so talented, it's making me feel inadequate.

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IT is glorious
IT is pure
IT is nature, love, life, and expression at it's finest

The summer cicadas, that irritating reminder
of a time I'll always love
With or without you.

IT is painful
IT is suffering
IT is everything they tell you not to do

The empty playground, park bench
graffiti of a harmless fling
Hold my hand?

IT is wanted
IT is sad
IT is what it is, and should not be

The disapproving glares, steady and
oh so easily dismissed.
I lied when I said I didn't mean IT.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA » Fri Mar 20, 2009 3:21 am

Okay, this is inspired from a narrative i wrote the other day.

She

Blonde long tresses,
Swirling,
In the evening wind,
She stands there,
Alone,
No one,
To confide in,
No one,
To share with,
No one,
To love,
She has nothing,
But the clothes on her back,
The books she carries,
Her weak ego,
Nothing,
But her mind.

How,
To start,
When you have forgotten all,
No name,
Never knowing,
What you look like.

Shining in the light,
Silver,
Gleaming,

Picking it up,
A sharp,
Crisp pain,
Rips my hand.

Red,
Smeared.
Down her arm.

But behind the red is myself,
Life,
Love,
Brought back,

Pain,
Disappeared,
Gone...

Forever and a day.


~Quick thoughts again, made up on the spot.Just then,
Lily.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby -Jasper » Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:48 pm

^ I like it. Very good for made up on the spot.

I might post one soon, working on it.

The poems that have been posted are quite long, I'm not good with long poems.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby Jasper<3 » Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:55 pm

I wrote a poem! Well, a haiku, so pretty much a baby poem... ya know.

Hard, sparkling skin
Beauty none can compare to
I call him Edward

:] My haiku.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby brunetterebel010 » Sat Mar 21, 2009 9:27 pm

Haha, I love this place already.. I only read the first two pages,and the last one, but I love to write poetry, I have like 40 pages printed of my poetry (and I haven't updated that in a few months)
I always write my poetry when big stuff is happening. Usually it is how I deal with being sad...
sometimes it is inspired by cool stuff sometimes it is out of nowhere.
Here is one, I don't remember why I wrote it exactly, it was a few weeks ago and it just hit me:

Untitled

Pretty baby, full of dreams
but she flies
on broken wings
left, confused, and incomplete
she walks her bath with blistered feet
scared to death
she'll run and hide
no one saw
the tears she cried
love has fled
hope, all but dead
as pretty dreams
leave her head
she sees it now
there is not point
in a world created
to disappoint.

so the ending needs work but I'm not quite done with it anyway, what do you think?
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA » Sat Mar 21, 2009 11:28 pm

That's great ^^^

I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA wrote:Okay , i am going to make up 2 poems on the spot in 8 minutes typing it straight onto here.
Note: This will not be my best work.

Hidden

Tall,
Towering,
Shadows, breaking down the side,
The last of the day.
The trees meet the dry grass.

Sky filled with mystery,
It can't decide what colour it is.
A bang shoots the air.
I flee,
Hiding in the Shadows,
I lay,
Hidden.



Chase

I run,
They are looking,
searching,
wandering,

Clueless,

I can see the edge of the earth,
They are lost,
looking for me.

Hopeless,

The edge is tempting,
like a cliff,
and it's freedom below.
They don't know what i am going to do is,

Fearless,

I can hear them,
Stumbling,
Dumbfounded,

This,
Will be my collection of last thougts.

If i don't let go now,
If i can't find srength to jump,
I can be sure the life life i lead after
won't be fulfilled.

They are getting closer now,

Solving

I can tell my hazel eyes are filled with fear,
Black hair withering,
Tall frame quivering.

Voices are coming now,
I've got to go,

I'm sorry,

I may seem selfish,
But it's right for me.

I seem to float,
as my foot slides off the edge,
The weight is lifted,

gone,

The Pain,
Worry
is gone,

Gone forever,

I know that they are,
Stopped i their path of tragic destruction.

They can't chase anymore,
If there is nothing to chase,

And those,
are my last thoughts.




~Thanks, that it, as i said not my best work,
quick thoughts......Love Lily ....


PS: Please comment.... :D


Please ,please comment i want to know wheter you like them ornot and advice on how to improve.Please.
Thanks,
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA » Sun Mar 22, 2009 5:52 am

More instant poetry coming up........



If i dreamt.

The grass is sparkling,
In my mind.

Sun shining,
Bright for me.

Peel the crisp outer shell off my cone of fantasy to see what lies beneath.

People are dying.
In terror.
How can i not have seen this.
The tradgedy.
People lost,
Forever.
Families torn,
Torn.

My mirage has ended,
The shell cracked.

Reality brought to life.
I can see now,
It's clear.

The rivalry,
Terrible.
I can't understand the horror.

It's happening.

And my green eyes twinkle as they fill slowly with tears,
A tear,
Rolls down my pale face,
Cutting through.
Crisp.
Making reality harsh.

Can't i dream,
dream,
forever........................

But if i dreamt.
Forever.
I would dream with a lingering pain,
There because of this,
This future memory.
That i won't forget.
And if i dream,
dream,
forever,
The pain will slowly harden to a crisp and it will never leave.
Guilt,
If i dreamt, it would be of war.
This war.
That has left me heartbroken.
Stunned.

If i dreamt,
Dreamt,
Forever.
They would turn into nightmares,
Never ending.

So i live,
Helping others,
I'm seeing terror,
For the good.






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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby goymer » Wed Mar 25, 2009 2:42 pm

More random crap I've written

Million Mile Serenade

You’re lying next to me
But it feels like you’re a million miles away

So this is my serenade to you
I’m writing down the words I can’t say
This was all too much to bear
When you hear this I’ll be far away

This million mile serenade
Is one I’ll sing for you every day
You won’t hear it, but you’ll feel it
From a distance, in a heartfelt way

My apology, my atonement
My taking back of every word I ever said to you
"Leah, you don't like me. I don't like you"
"Thank you Captain Obvious"

NBOAD and proud (ish...)

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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby -Jasper » Wed Mar 25, 2009 3:12 pm

^ I like it.

I just made this up now because I said I'd post a poem. I'm not good at long poems, so it is
very short. :lol:

Fall,
Far under icy waves
Through restless swirls of air
Into the bottom of my heart

I wonder if,
You read minds
Look through my eyes to my soul
Trace meaning back from my words
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby brunetterebel010 » Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:10 pm

goymer wrote:More random crap I've written

Million Mile Serenade

You’re lying next to me
But it feels like you’re a million miles away

So this is my serenade to you
I’m writing down the words I can’t say
This was all too much to bear
When you hear this I’ll be far away

This million mile serenade
Is one I’ll sing for you every day
You won’t hear it, but you’ll feel it
From a distance, in a heartfelt way

My apology, my atonement
My taking back of every word I ever said to you

*british accent*
'tisn't crap at all. I rather fancy it dahling..
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