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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA » Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:27 am

His

His arms,
Spider out,
Reaching for it's prey.

Winding,
Tangling,
Then coiling around it's innnocent prey.

His lips,
Curl,
Into satisfaction,
As he retrieves his newly caught victim.

His eyes,
Twinkle,
With evil.
Shattering us with fear.

He,
Spreads his fear,
Everywhere he goes,
Leaving behind tradegy,
And heartbreak.

Will I be next?
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby -Jasper » Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:43 pm

^ I like that, it means 2 things, as I'm reading it.

Elizabeth (i think) british accent? :lol:
Maybe the queen would talk like that ... hehe

I'm not feeling very inspired right now....
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA » Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:23 am

^What two things does it mean to you?
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby brunetterebel010 » Fri Mar 27, 2009 8:44 am

Yes dear British Accent! Who doesn't love a British accent??? hahaha. Actually, I really just adore anyone with an accent. They are BRILLIANT!!! hahaha. Australian is my personal favorite.

Okay so this is my first poem I ever wrote and finished and edited etc. What do you think? (the date is when I wrote it (almost 3 years ago -wow-, and yes I reaize all my poetry rhymes, its like a disease of mine, I can't write poetry that doesn't rhyme...hahaha)


Hero
5-5-07

I don’t want to be a hero
That’s too much responsibility
I don’t think that I can handle
Bein’ what a hero should be
Don’t make me a hero
I will only let you down
If you lean on me
You’ll only hit the ground
Make someone else your hero
Like the friend you always call
When life is goin’ wrong
‘Cause if you make me your hero
I will only let you fall
I’m not the kind of person
You would want to be
‘Cause people only hate you
If your anything like me
Some say there’s a hero
Hidden in us all
But the demons deep inside of me
Have the hero
Back against the wall
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby -Jasper » Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:04 pm

I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA wrote:^What two things does it mean to you?

Firstly, I don't know why, maybe it was the word 'spider', but I thought of a spider, or some kind of other animal. Then later in the poem I thought it could be a person as well.


Elizabeth - I like american accents. :lol:
I like your poem, especially the end lines.
it doesn't ryhme though, is that cause it's an old one and you didn't rhyme then?
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby brunetterebel010 » Fri Mar 27, 2009 10:15 pm

-Jasper,(did the british accent thig offend you?) that's funny. O well, it's just because they are different right? Because I'm from Texas so Texas accents don't bug me, but some people are like "wow, you talk funny" and my poems all rhyme ever other line or so (i don't set a pattern, and they may not actually rhyme just sort of sound the same) but I'm sort of obsessive about it. It's strange ~lol~
But all the sam thank you for the comliment. I am glad it's good enough SOMEONE likes it. I was considering choosing a piece of my work and sending it to those poetry competitions they have sometimes, like where you can get your poem published. But I'm always afraid it's stupid...
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby -Jasper » Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:40 pm

No, it didn't offend me. :lol: I think it is just because it's different.
I think you should send a poem in, because at the worst it won't get published, and at the best it will. No one will know who you are, and I think your poems are pretty good.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA » Fri Apr 03, 2009 11:33 pm

I wrote like 8 poems in English at school yeaterday...I couldn't help my self....We were only meant to write 3.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby I.WANT.TO.BE.BELLA » Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:01 am

C'mon people! Where did everyone go? IT'S DEAD AROUND HERE!!!! *echo echo*
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Re: Poet's Corner

Postby goymer » Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:09 pm

Okey dokey, there is life here :lol: These two aren't new, but I've not posted them here yet.

I Die A Little

Everyday I die a little
Everyday I cry a little
You're gone, I know
And you’re not coming back
And everyday I die a little more

I’m on my own
It’s been a while
We were together a year
Where did you go?

I tried so hard
To understand
The reason why you left me
Where did we go wrong?

Everyday I die a little
Everyday I cry a little
You're gone, I know
And you’re not coming back
And everyday I die a little more

I’m falling
Destroying
Myself and
I can’t change it
Can’t stop it
It hurts but
I do it
Over
And over
And over
For you

I’m turning into
A shadow of me
When I look in the mirror
I hate what I see
I’ve been wasting away
Since you’ve been gone
And I’m starting to think
That maybe I was wrong

To put my trust in you
With all your lies
Wrong not to think
It was all a disguise
To lure me in
To be part of your game
But I won’t be like the rest
Because I’m not the same

Embers

Do you remember that night?
We sat and watched the stars so bright
We said that we’d always stay strong
So tell me then, where this all went wrong

You and I were inseparable
You said this love was irreplaceable
But now we’re falling apart at the seams
So tell me
Where do we go from here?

We went through the best of times
The worst of times, but we were doing fine
Now things are so messed up, and I fell behind
To the things I have left to remind
Us of what we had before
You were always wanting more
‘Cos

You and I were inseparable
You said this love was irreplaceable
But now we’re falling apart at the seams
Now tell me
Are you even listening?!

You and I were inseparable
You said this love was irreplaceable
But now we’re falling apart at the seams

Do you remember that night?
We sat and watched the stars so bright
We said that we’d always stay strong
And that is why I wrote this song
"Leah, you don't like me. I don't like you"
"Thank you Captain Obvious"

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