Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby Emmett_Pwnz_All » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:04 pm

@vampire something whatever :D
HIII nothing muchies.

@Sami
LOL nooo I ish teh same :D Ish all good.
And yeh :D

@ Derek
YAY thankies fwend :D
And noies I dunno where to put my writing online.... =S
And okies :D
WRITE YOUR FIRST CHAPTER SOON SO MIMI CAN READETH IT!
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby DudeRocksTheTwilight » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:06 pm

Hey guys!
Low and behold, I'm back!
My parents said, "Come in soon and watch TV with us!"
I go in, and behold, they are both asleep on the couches.
Now, keep in mind that it is only 8 PM.

So I will post my first chapter soon!!! :D
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby vampirechick101 » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:07 pm

lol heyyyz!
I'm good thnx; I'm kinda bored also XD
what's everyone up to?

Ohhh you're writting a story?? awesome!! what is it about?
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby Emmett_Pwnz_All » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:08 pm

@Derek
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY PARTAY!!!!

@tpam
Nothing much and you?
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby vampirechick101 » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:11 pm

nothing much either X]. I'm kinda just chilling and listening to music.
I have to catch up in my reading but i'm too lazy to at the moment hahaha.
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby Emmett_Pwnz_All » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:13 pm

YOUR AVVIE ISH
SEXELLENT
:D
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby vampirechick101 » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:15 pm

HAHAHAH thankiiez!
I'm totally in love with Kellan&&Emmett!!!!! <33333

I see you are too; that's awesome!!
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby DudeRocksTheTwilight » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:16 pm

Hey Mimi and...(vampirechick, you're Mimi, right?)
I'm almost done with Chapter 1.
But I'm hitting a bump.
I'm having trouble writing in a girl's POV, because the first chapter is in both Renesmee and Bella's POV.
Any suggestions?
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby blasphemous_contessa » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:16 pm

This prologue that I'm posting here is BY NO MEANS a final draft. It has only been edited twice.

that being said

Waking Dream: Volume 1 The Hall of Shadows

Prologue

With a yawn, Therese kicked at the dirt in front of here. It seemed liek hours she'd been waiting for her best friend, Emmaline, to come to the door. She knew that wasn't true, but Therese had always been an impatient creature. Especially lately. She kept geting glimpses of the strangest things, a temple fire, a crying child, an injured boy.

Even more unsettling was the way the very air around her seemed to change. Before she barely noticed it, unless it were windy or humid, the air around her just was. But these days there seemed to be a power in nature. She could feel the omnipressent weight of the atmosphere and the burden of possiblity. Colors danced in her peripheral vision and music seemes to come from the very starts at night. There was beauty everywhere and it seemed tot he girl as if she had been wearing dark glasses and ear plugs her whole life. Suddenly everythign just was, without constraint or fear. She liked the feeling.

But alogn with the power, and enhanced sense there was soemthing eerily sinister going on lately, too. Her best friend seemed distant, and it seemed as if there were ceatures fromt he shadows reaching out for her. In the faces of old friends she saw a feral glint in their eyes, much like that of a large animal that was never meant to be a pet. There was a restlessness in everyone she had ever felt close to. There was a spark of familiarity in the faces of strangers in the street, and eyes seemed to be on her at all times. Therese didn't know if she was simply paranoid of if there really was a shift in he balance of power.

Her dreams seemed to be telling her something important. Something about a beautiful, young priestess in a long forgotten cult. Therese spent hours filling notebooks with what her dreams and visions told her of this girl, this Lealoka. The beautiful doomed woman. And with each grain of knowledge she gleaned, the clearer the energy of the universe became, and the more persistent the feeling of being followed.

If she weren't so certain that Lealoka had something to tell her, she'd leave the shadow world alone. Ignore the beckonning from the strange place where dreams were born. But Therese could no more stay away from the mysterious, fog shrouded hallway than Emmaline could go a week without finding some new boy to moon over. It went beyond compulsion.

And Therese wanted to know why.
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Re: Teen Thread -- Ages 13-19

Postby roo-roo91 » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:18 pm

i wubs you guys, really i do.
XP.
you can make me feel better sometimes.
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