Openhome wrote:I LOVE this story. Honestly, it is the best thing written that I've read, published or not, this year. Here are my thoughts:
Yes, it's Bella. Otherwise why would he care. She is either a vampire or a human.
What if vampire venom could heal dead humans? What if it changed when it was irradiated, and what was in the cage were humans being re-born?
Her ability to write cliff-hangers is jut killing me. I read it until chapter 6 and can't wait to have some time to myself to read more.
I truly TRULY hope she writes her own fiction, because she has the potential to be the best of the best.
The last few chapters do contain a lot of hope. Edward is beginning to see the light, and Alice is beginning to heal. If she can pull this off, it will be one of the most anticipated endings ever.
Kay & Openhome ~ You just made my heart sing with hope. I will go with that. I remember Maria wants to build an army I think more powerful than before.
Oh, and it's my understanding that what she has so far is Part 1 of this story. Someone made to confirm, but I think I read that right over on Facebook.
BTW THE OFFICE CHAPTER 18 IS UP!!
Folks, get your hankies out, it's a tear jerker. But I will have faith.